I didn't know she was listening
Till I put the phone down
I didn't notice her eyes twinkling
Till I wiped my tears with a frown
But I sure did hear her happily singing
When I confirmed that her mom's coming to town!
A 2.30 am composition ;-)
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6 comments:
haha.........
nice, humourous poem......
arre, u r to Versatile Poet. ;-)
God Job Jai, Gr8 goin.........
hehe...veryyyyyyy chweett...
but to b frank na..when i started reading this..i was like..yeh hui na baat...first line ekdum senti laga...i was getting carried off and andddd uffff .... :p :p
hehe...not all can write like this..love ur humour...keep going :P
Humor and Jai are probably becoming synonyms..love the way u link sentiment and humor...great job jai...i think ur talented enough not to only limit urself to jhaikus (jhakaas+haikus)..try sonnets, limericks, epics ets... ;-)
Great to know the other part of the ever humorous and positive Jai.
Jai"The poet".
Hail to thee.
Romila
Thanks guys, thanks for the sweet words and encouragement :-)
Looks like you are at your best at 2:30AM.
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